Showing posts with label Sentinel Jack Hardy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Sentinel Jack Hardy. Show all posts

Thursday, 6 June 2013

Sentinel Short Story Review



It’s time to board the rocket ship and blast to god- knows-fucking-where for my review of short story Sentinel. This tale, by author Jack Hardy, is something I picked up a few weeks ago on Smashwords as a freebie. 

The story is about intergalactic, genetically-enhanced, space thief Adrian Gates. Things start off with Adrian heading through a market on some distant planet trying to lose someone who is following him. But his efforts fail and he is caught by a bounty hunter called Gu. 

While Adrian is being held captive in a spaceship, Gu reveals a devastating truth to him about his past.
And unfortunately that’s all I can really say about Sentinel without spoiling the ending. I know it’s not much, but then again, there’s not much substance here, even for a short story. I’ve seen longer tales on the back of pop tart boxes. 

Sentinel’s not a bad little story, the imagery is good especially when Adrian arrives at his final location and the city he is chased through is also well described in the narrative.

That said though, the story ultimately doesn’t go anywhere. It would have been nice to have a couple of more twists to it and the premise would certainly work as a full length book. But as it is, this version just goes straight from A-B.

Sentinel gets 5/10 and is available here.